class-6/1

In class Rab told us the next essay will be due on June 15th, and there would be a in class PWT for the old man and the sea so we have to start reading it.

After that we moved to the ILC and Rab gave us our scores and comments of our PWT. It wasn't bad as I thought but I did overgrade my writing. Rab told me a couple things to improve the paragraph.

• write more amount
• don't go to the example to fast
• keep it connected with meiland and morgan (especially the conclusion)

I have to be careful from the next essay.