In class we peer reviewed our essays in the essay group. Reading other peoples essays was a very good opportunity to learn what a good essay is. The essay I wrote this time was the 5th one that I wrote in English in my life, so I felt the difference in level so much. I think that I have to work really really hard on my essays to catch up to the CB members.
After doing peer review Rab showed us some videos of demos which happened in other countries. I thought that the Japanese should be more democratic but I don't know where to start from. I don't know much about politics so after doing some research I'll post my opinion of the way Japan should change.
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